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Chapter 3 · Module 1
Professional Foundation
Resumes and CVs
Materials compiled by Matthew Clement · Career Communications · Hanyang University
Chapter 3 · Module 1: Professional Foundation

Crafting resumes that win interviews, not just pass through them

Your resume has one job: get you into the room. This chapter teaches you the strategy behind every word: from action verb selection and quantification to ATS formatting and the psychology of how hiring managers actually read documents.

📄 Resume, CV, and e-Resume formats
100-point evaluation rubric
🤖 ATS optimization strategy
📋 20-item completion checklist
Why This Matters

Your resume gets 6 seconds. Make them count.

A 2018 eye-tracking study by Ladders Inc. found that recruiters spend an average of 7.4 seconds on an initial resume scan. They're not reading: they're pattern-matching. Understanding that distinction changes everything about how you write.

The Core Argument

A resume isn't a record of where you've been. It's a prediction of what you'll do next. Every word on the page should answer one question: why should this company believe you can succeed in this specific role?

What a resume actually is

A resume is a two-part document. The first part is your Assertions Section: your summary, objective, and headline skills that make claims about who you are. The second is your Evidence Section: the experience, education, and accomplishments that back those claims up.

Most students write only the Evidence Section and hope the reader connects the dots. Employers don't connect dots. They move on to the next resume.

What a resume is NOT

  • An official personnel document: you can and should emphasize your best qualities
  • A confessional: you're not obligated to disclose everything
  • A job application: it's a marketing document, not a form
  • A "career obituary": a listing of everything you've ever done
Focus on the Employer's Needs

Before writing a single bullet point, answer three questions: What makes a perfect candidate for this job? What does the employer want and need? What special abilities would set an exceptional candidate apart? Your resume is the answer to those questions: not a biography of your life.

The Two-Section Framework
Section 1: Assertions
Professional Summary, Objective, Key Skills headline
Makes the claims. Says who you are and what you offer.
Section 2: Evidence
Experience, Education, Achievements, Projects
Backs the claims up. Proves you can do what you say.
Essential Components

The anatomy of a winning resume

Every component serves a strategic purpose. Understanding why each section exists helps you write each one more effectively.

Section What Goes Here Strategic Purpose Common Failure Mode
Contact Information Full name (large), phone, professional email, city, LinkedIn URL. Optional: visa status Immediate professional credibility. Your name is your brand. Unprofessional email (starcraftking@hanmail.net) undermines everything below it
Professional Summary 3-4 sentences highlighting your most relevant skills, experience, and what you bring to this specific role The "headline" that earns the recruiter's next 30 seconds of attention Vague, generic sentences like "hardworking team player seeking opportunities to grow"
Highlight of Qualifications 5-6 concise bullet points showcasing your strongest, most relevant capabilities Skimmable proof of fit before the reader reaches your experience section Listing soft skills without evidence ("excellent communicator")
Education Institution, location, degree, major/minor, graduation date, GPA (if 3.0+), relevant courses, honors Most important section for recent graduates: establish academic credibility Listing GPA of 2.8 or lower; omitting relevant coursework when you have no work experience
Experience Employer, location, dates, job title, 3-5 bullet points per role using strong action verbs and quantified results The evidence that backs up your claims: shows what you've actually done Writing job descriptions ("answered phones") instead of achievements ("handled 80+ customer calls daily, maintaining 98% satisfaction rating")
Skills Computer skills, languages (with proficiency level), technical certifications Hits the ATS keywords; shows range of technical capability Listing "Microsoft Word" as a skill in 2026; listing skills without context
"A resume isn't just a list of past jobs. It's about YOU: how you performed and what you accomplished, especially achievements relevant to the job you're seeking."
Matthew Clement, Career Communications Chapter 3
Writing Technique

Every bullet starts with a verb that earns attention

Weak resumes describe tasks. Strong resumes describe achievements. The difference almost always starts with the first word of each bullet point: the action verb.

The Rule

Every experience bullet point must begin with a strong, specific action verb in the appropriate tense: past tense for previous roles, present tense for your current one. Never begin with "I," "Responsible for," "Duties included," or "Helped to."

Leadership and Management
Directed
Spearheaded
Championed
Orchestrated
Mobilized
Supervised
Oversaw
Recruited
Analysis and Strategy
Analyzed
Forecasted
Identified
Evaluated
Optimized
Researched
Streamlined
Diagnosed
Achievement and Results
Generated
Delivered
Achieved
Exceeded
Surpassed
Reduced
Increased
Launched
Communication and Collaboration
Negotiated
Persuaded
Presented
Facilitated
Advised
Collaborated
Coordinated
Translated
Quantification Framework

Numbers make claims believable

Recruiters can't verify your claims: but they can assess their credibility. Specific numbers create credibility. Vague claims create skepticism. Here's the formula.

The Quantification Formula

For every bullet point, try to answer at least one of these four questions:
How much?
Revenue generated, cost saved, budget managed, items processed
How many?
Team size managed, clients served, events organized, products created
How fast? / How often?
Deadline met, frequency of reporting, speed of delivery, throughput
What was the percentage improvement?
Increased by X%, reduced by Y%, improved satisfaction from A to B

Examples in Practice

Weak (task-based)
"Responsible for social media management for the company's accounts."
Strong (achievement-based)
"Managed Instagram and LinkedIn strategy for 3 accounts, growing combined following from 4,200 to 11,800 in 8 months through weekly content calendars and A/B tested posting schedules."
Weak (task-based)
"Helped with customer service at a retail store."
Strong (achievement-based)
"Processed an average of 100+ transactions daily with 99.9% accuracy; consistently ranked top 3 in monthly customer satisfaction scores among 18 staff members."
No Numbers? No Problem.

If you genuinely can't quantify, use qualitative specificity: scope, context, scale, and outcome. "Organized events" is weak. "Organized 4 departmental workshops averaging 40 attendees each, coordinating scheduling, venue, and materials for a 200-person university club" is strong even without a percentage improvement.

Before and After

Side by side: weak vs. strong

The difference between a resume that gets ignored and one that earns a callback usually comes down to a handful of specific, fixable problems. Here they are in plain sight.

Professional Summary

✗ Weak
Hardworking and dedicated recent graduate 
seeking a position where I can use my 
skills and grow professionally. I am a 
team player and quick learner who is 
excited about new opportunities.
Zero specificity. Could apply to any job at any company. Gives the reader nothing to hold onto.
✓ Strong
Marketing Communications graduate from 
Hanyang University with hands-on experience 
in social media strategy, SEO, and K-beauty 
campaign analysis. Completed Google Digital 
Marketing Certificate and led a content 
project averaging 1,200 views per article. 
Seeking a Marketing Communications 
Internship at Amorepacific to contribute 
data-driven campaign strategy.
Specific school, specific skills, specific evidence, specific target role and company. Immediately compelling.

Experience Bullets

✗ Weak
• Worked at coffee shop
• Helped customers
• Made coffee
• Did some social media
• Responsible for opening/
  closing duties
Task-based. No numbers. No impact. The hiring manager has no idea what kind of employee you were.
✓ Strong
• Served 80-100 customers daily during 
  peak morning rush, maintaining average 
  wait time under 4 minutes
• Created and managed Instagram content 
  calendar; grew café's following from 
  340 to 2,100 in 5 months
• Trained 3 new staff members on POS 
  system and customer service protocols
• Handled daily cash reconciliation of 
  ₩800,000 to ₩1.2M with zero discrepancies 
  over 14-month tenure
Achievement-based, specific, quantified. The hiring manager can visualize exactly what working with you looks like.
Common Mistakes

Six mistakes that guarantee rejection

These aren't rare edge cases. They appear on the majority of student resumes submitted in class, and on a significant percentage of real applications sent to real companies. Learn to recognize them in your own work before a recruiter does.

⚠ Mistake 1

Unprofessional Email Address

starcraftking@hanmail.net, partygirl123@hotmail.com, cool_oppa99@naver.com. Your email address is the first thing an HR manager sees before opening your resume. One glance ends your application before it begins.

Use firstname.lastname@gmail.com or your university email. Create a dedicated professional address for your job search today.
⚠ Mistake 2

Task Descriptions Instead of Achievements

"Responsible for answering phones and helping customers" tells the employer nothing about how well you did the job. Every resume says people "worked hard." Only strong resumes prove it with evidence.

Reframe every bullet around outcomes: "Handled 60+ daily customer inquiries with a 97% first-call resolution rate, reducing escalations by 30%."
⚠ Mistake 3

Generic, One-Size-Fits-All Summary

"Hardworking team player seeking opportunities to grow" says nothing that distinguishes you from any of the other 200 applicants. A generic summary is functionally the same as no summary at all.

Tailor your summary to the specific role and company. Name the position you want. Reference the company's actual work. Make it specific enough that it couldn't belong to anyone else.
⚠ Mistake 4

Ignoring the ATS Filter

In Korea and internationally, large companies route applications through Applicant Tracking Systems before any human reads them. A resume with the wrong format or missing keywords gets filtered out automatically, often before a single person sees it.

Use standard section headers, .docx format, no graphics or tables in the main body, and deliberately include keywords from the job description in your own language throughout the document.
⚠ Mistake 5

Too Long, Too Dense, or Too Designed

Multi-column layouts, graphics, icons, and creative design elements may look impressive but break ATS parsing and make it harder for recruiters to find key information. A 3-page resume as a new graduate signals poor judgment about relevance.

One page for new graduates and those with fewer than 5 years of experience. Clean margins (.5 to 1 inch). Standard fonts (Times New Roman, Arial, Calibri). Design serves readability, not aesthetics.
⚠ Mistake 6

Personal Information That Doesn't Belong

Age, photo, marital status, blood type (despite common Korean practice), and physical characteristics have no place on an international-standard resume. Including them raises red flags about your understanding of professional norms.

For Korean applications to Korean companies, some personal information is expected. For international companies or roles with Western-trained hiring managers, omit all personal details not related to your professional qualifications.
Case Studies

What strong (and broken) resumes actually look like

The most effective way to improve your own resume is to diagnose someone else's. These case studies are drawn from real examples: with the specific errors and strengths that make them instructive.

From Class Case Study: The Phantom Achiever (Justin Case)

The resume that lists everything except what matters

Justin's resume is two pages long and covers a decade of activity. Yet when you read it carefully, almost none of the bullets describe what he actually achieved. They describe what he was supposed to do. "Responsible for managing a team of 10." "Duties included coordinating with external vendors." "Helped with customer onboarding process." The form is right: proper sections, correct chronological order, respectable companies. But it has no evidence. It's assertions without proof.

The deeper problem: Justin's resume reads as if he attended those jobs rather than performed them. The question a recruiter asks after reading isn't "Can I see myself working with this person?" but "Was this person actually effective at anything?"

The fix is not to add more details: it's to replace descriptions with outcomes. Not "coordinated with external vendors" but "negotiated revised delivery terms with 4 key vendors, reducing average lead time from 18 to 11 days and cutting logistics costs by ₩12M annually."

Lesson

Attending a job and excelling at a job look identical on a bad resume. The difference only appears when you force yourself to write specific, measurable outcomes for every role.

Failure Case Study: The Credibility Destroyer (Anita Job)

When embellishment crosses into fiction

Anita's resume contains some of the most creative writing in any job application ever seen in a classroom setting. As Camp Program Director, she "served millions of customers each summer through a multi-galaxy program schedule" and "supervised a multi-planetary and interdimensional camp staff." Her marketing plan was "quantum." Her 2025 achievement of 610,000 camp participants was "one of the largest camps in the Universe."

The instinct behind Anita's approach is understandable: she wanted to seem impressive. But the approach reveals a fundamental misunderstanding of what employers are actually looking for. No recruiter needs you to serve millions of customers. They need you to handle a realistic workload reliably and professionally. Actual numbers: "served 850 campers across three sessions" or "managed a staff of 22 counselors": are more impressive than absurdist fiction because they're believable.

The danger Anita's resume illustrates is that embellishment has a way of compounding. One exaggeration requires another to support it. Before long, the document describes a person who couldn't possibly exist, and any sophisticated recruiter recognizes it immediately.

Lesson

The most compelling thing on a resume is a specific, believable number. Modesty with precision beats exaggeration every time. "Served 850 campers" is more compelling than "served millions" because it's verifiable and shows judgment.

Best Practice Strong Summary: The Hanyang Marketing Student

What a well-crafted student summary actually looks like

Consider this summary from a third-year Business Administration student targeting a Marketing Communications Internship at Amorepacific: "Marketing Communications candidate at Hanyang University with demonstrated content strategy experience through Hanyang Business Review, where articles average 1,200+ views. Completed Google Digital Marketing Certificate with hands-on work in SEO, social media analytics, and K-beauty campaign research. Seeking a Marketing Internship at Amorepacific to apply brand storytelling skills to a market leader's global content strategy."

What makes this work: it names the specific company (Amorepacific), references a real credential (Google Certificate), quantifies a real achievement (1,200+ views), and explains the connection between the student's background and this particular role. No version of this sentence could belong to anyone else applying for this job.

Lesson

A strong summary is specific enough that swapping the name at the top would require rewriting the whole thing. If your summary could belong to any applicant, it belongs to none of them.

Resume vs. CV

When to send a resume: and when to send a CV instead

The choice between a resume and a CV is not about preference. It's about context, audience, and convention. Sending the wrong document signals that you don't understand your field.

Aspect Resume Curriculum Vitae (CV)
Typical Length 1-2 pages maximum 2+ pages; as long as necessary
Focus Concise highlights tailored to the specific role Comprehensive career and academic history
Primary Use Cases Corporate roles, internships, most non-academic jobs Academic positions, research roles, grant applications, international applications (Europe, Middle East, Asia)
Customization Must be tailored for every single application Generally consistent; minor emphasis adjustments
Unique Sections Professional Summary, Highlights of Qualifications Publications, Presentations, Research Projects, Grants, Teaching Experience, Conference Activity
Korea Context Standard for most corporate and startup applications Expected for professor and research positions; also used for international job applications
Korean-Specific Note

Korean companies often require a standardized application form (이력서, i-ryeok-seo) rather than a Western-format resume. However, understanding Western resume principles remains essential: many Korean companies with international operations, as well as any multinational hiring in Korea, will expect the standards covered in this chapter. The distinctions between documents are covered in depth in Chapter 8.

Watch and Learn

Three videos that will change how you write

Seeing strong resume principles applied in real time: by working professionals and recruiters: accelerates your understanding faster than reading alone.

Brands and institutions covered in this chapter
Google
LinkedIn
Amorepacific
Samsung
Lotte
Hyundai
Saramin
Google resume tips

Google Career Tips

Iconic · From Google

How to Get Your Resume Seen by Google Recruiters

Google's hiring team walks through exactly what they look for: and what makes them stop reading. The principles apply universally.

Source: Google Career Certificates
Watch on YouTube →

ATS Resume Strategy

Practitioner · HR Technology

How ATS Systems Filter Your Resume Before a Human Reads It

A recruiter at a major Korean conglomerate explains exactly how their ATS scoring works: and what applicants consistently get wrong about formatting and keywords.

Source: LinkedIn Learning / HR Professionals
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Korean Job Market

Korean Context · 취업 준비

이력서 vs. Resume: What Korean Conglomerates Actually Want

A Hanyang University career counselor compares the Korean standardized 이력서 format against the Western resume structure: and explains when to use each in the Korean job market.

Source: Korean Career Advice / Hanyang Career Center
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References

What to read beyond this chapter

The frameworks in this chapter draw on a body of professional development research. These are the books, thinkers, and resources worth exploring in depth.

Core Books

★ Core Text

What Color Is Your Parachute?

Richard N. Bolles. Updated annually

The canonical job-hunting guide, updated every year for five decades. The resume chapters specifically address the shift from task-based to achievement-based writing. Required reading for understanding how employers think.

The Resume Writing Guide

Lisa McGrimmon

Practical, structured, and applicable regardless of industry. Excellent for understanding the logic behind why certain resume elements work: and the psychology of why recruiters stop reading when they do.

Knock 'em Dead Resumes

Martin Yate. Multiple editions

Industry-specific resume advice with hundreds of example bullets across professions. Particularly useful for understanding how language norms differ by field and seniority level.

The Google Resume

Gayle Laakmann McDowell

Written by a former Google recruiter. Explains explicitly what top-tier technology and consulting companies look for: and how to reverse-engineer your background to match their filters.

Designing Your Life

Bill Burnett and Dave Evans

Not a resume book, but the best framework for the question behind the resume: who are you applying to be? The "Workview" and "Lifeview" exercises in this book directly inform strong resume summaries.

Key Thinkers

Lou Adler

CEO, The Adler Group · Performance-Based Hiring

Developed the performance-based hiring framework that underlies much of modern resume strategy. His insight: hiring managers don't care what you've done: they care what you'll do in their specific role. His work explains why achievement-based resumes work psychologically.

Liz Ryan

Founder, Human Workplace · Forbes Contributor

Former Fortune 500 HR executive turned author and speaker. Her "pain letter" and "human-voice resume" approaches challenge the conventional robotic resume style: particularly relevant for creative and non-traditional roles.

Austin Belcak

Founder, Cultivated Culture

Runs one of the most data-driven resume strategy resources available. His research on ATS pass-through rates, keyword matching, and what actually correlates with interview callbacks is particularly applicable to this chapter's technical sections.

Key Ideas from the Research

Recruiters' initial scan of a resume averages 7.4 seconds, with attention concentrated primarily on the name, current title and company, start and end dates, and the top two-thirds of the first page.

Ladders Inc. Eye-Tracking Study (2018): "You Only Get 7.4 Seconds"

Resumes that include quantified achievements receive 40% more interview callbacks than those describing tasks and responsibilities without measurable outcomes, even when the underlying experience is identical.

ResumeGo Research Study (2021): "The Power of Numbers in Job Applications"

Over 98% of Fortune 500 companies use ATS systems, and an estimated 75% of resumes are rejected by the ATS before a human sees them: primarily due to formatting issues and keyword mismatch rather than candidate underqualification.

Jobscan ATS Research (2023): "How ATS Works and Why It Matters"

Further Reading and Tools

Completion Checklist

20 things you should be able to say yes to

Check off each item as you apply it to your own resume. Your progress saves automatically in your browser.

Chapter 3 Progress 0 of 20
Understanding the Basics
I can explain the difference between a resume and a CV, and know which to use in a given context.
I understand the two-section framework: Assertions Section and Evidence Section.
I can articulate what a recruiter is actually scanning for in the first 7-8 seconds.
I understand what ATS is, why it matters, and how it filters applications before humans see them.
Crafting Each Section
My contact information includes a professional email address and LinkedIn URL.
My professional summary is specific to the role I'm targeting: it names the position, company, and relevant credentials.
Every bullet in my experience section begins with a strong action verb in the correct tense.
At least 70% of my experience bullets include a quantified result (number, percentage, dollar amount, scale).
My education section includes relevant coursework, GPA (if 3.0+), honors, and any study abroad experience.
I have included keywords from my target job description naturally throughout the document.
Format and Presentation
My resume is one page (or two if I have 5+ years of relevant experience) with margins between 0.5 and 1 inch.
I am using a standard, ATS-compatible font (Times New Roman, Arial, Calibri) at 10-12pt for body text.
My dates are in reverse chronological order and formatted consistently throughout.
I have proofread the document three times for grammar, spelling, and consistency.
Self-Evaluation
I can identify the specific ATS keywords for my target role and confirm they appear in my document.
I have had at least one other person read my resume and provide specific feedback on clarity and impact.
I can explain the difference between a task-based bullet and an achievement-based bullet using an example from my own resume.
I know when to use a Korean 이력서 format vs. a Western-format resume in my target job market.
Strategic Connection to Next Steps
I understand how this resume will serve as the foundation for my Chapter 4 cover letter: both documents tell a consistent story.
I have identified at least one real company and role I want to target, and my resume is currently tailored for that specific application.
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